As Atticus stood in the center of the court room, preparing to give an assertion that truely came from the heart, the crowd was surprisingly silent. No one moved an inch, even the children were inaudible. Very noble, honest and convincing words poured from his lips, and I know everyone in that room was feeling something, the feeling in which Tom Robinson was NOT guilty. When Atticus was finished the crowd was still in complete silence, and a few moments later, the jury went into discussion.

Comment: Kelly- There was only a few misspelled words and some words could be a little stronger. Other than that, you just need to finish the paragraph and it will be great!

Comment: Randi- This is way pro maddie!lol! you are amazing at writing! cool! lol so ya your amazing! see ya later chicka

ashley says a few misspelled words but its still amazing!

Kelsie says, there are a few misspelled words but you still did a very good job, its amazing!

Amy: WOW. Way to use words. Sounded great and I don't see any errors. GREAT JOB!!!